Chef w.i.p.

[dansemacabre]

this is my mini for the black scorpion contest:

[Tim C]

It looks good so far mate, I am going to sound very boring when I say that the shirt and the trousers need more definition. Now whether or not that is a highlight or two or a shade or two it is hard to tell. But it needs to pop more to make it a contender. Still a very solid start.

[roguetrader]

looking good so far, i think tim has said what needs to be the next step, good luck ;D

[dansemacabre]

Hi, i've tried the white thing but i'm not satisfied by the result (prolly fault of my lack of ability ) anyway here's the semi final version:

[roguetrader]

its good but the only thing for me is everything looks pale, if thats the look you were going for then great, but i would think more back shading all round mate to make it a contender

[mousekiller]

I agree with RT, a bit more shading over all should put you over the edge for the competition... just be sure to come back and reapply your highlights if you do decide to throw a few washes in there.

[jabberwocky]

I am liking the freehand bit on the rag on his right hip. The blood looks pretty good, although I think having a bit of black-red would help to add some realism--I like the way Tim does his blood, have a look.